A Lousy Poem

Sunday, February 19, 2006

I am sitting here
With a Pain on my back
Because I have a slipped disc.

Stupid slipped disc stupid slipped disc
why must you afflict my poor little back?
I hate you slipped disc.

Stupid me stupid me
why go and cheong until got slipped disc?
because my platoon all paika paichu cannot carry heavy stuff
make me the small guy carry
until i got a slipped disc.

stupid SAF, Stupid SAF!

7:16 PM | Permalink

This is the lamest poem i've ever read! Typical Raymond man. haha

Posted by Anonymous | 1:22 AM

ohh ya.. i forgot to say that it was me! Dale!

Posted by Anonymous | 1:24 AM

o dear.. that's so suay..

my bro also got injured due to NS, fell from 5-tonner while it was moving and broke his head.. but he's ok now and thank goodness for him, still able to engage actively in sports.

i hope you will recover soon yah..

Posted by Anonymous | 8:13 PM

now, for what it's worth...i really did think that was very funny. the last bits especially 'full of emotion'. :)

Posted by Ellipsis | 1:37 AM

haha.. funny...

hey update more!!

Posted by Anonymous | 1:17 AM

Dale... don't deny it... you like my lame poems! haha.

petals: my slipped disc looks bad, but I believe I'll be ok. thanks for the well wishes!

a.B.o.Y: YES! oh man. I wanted to add like 10 more exclamation marks at the back though.

jasmine: I'll be updating a lot more from now on!

Posted by Anonymous | 12:21 PM

7 days have passed. I still did not see a new entry. Where are you??

Posted by Anonymous | 12:26 AM

RAYMOND TAN!!!

How's your back? Did you check?
Healing is for you!
Keep believing eh?

-> momo =)

Posted by Anonymous | 12:35 AM

A slipped disc? That's gotta hurt. Take care and get some rest. =)

Posted by Zen|th | 12:24 AM